Regarding English Sentence.

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19 March 2010 Dear Experts,

Please find the error in the following sentence and correct me :

1. During your next visit to my place, you shall collect certificates.

2. While coming, you shall bring company seal.

I may wait for the views of experts on the above two sentences.

Bhaskaran Chackrapani Warrier

Bhaskaran Chackrapani Warrier (Expert)
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20 March 2010 Sir
If I correct,the answer would appear as follows:-
1.During your next visit to my place,you can collect the certificates.
2.While coming,you should bring the common seal.

If I may be permitted to edit,the answer will be as follows:-
1. You may collect the certificates on your next visit to my office.
2. You may bring the common seal at that time.

Kishanlal Paliwal

Kishanlal Paliwal (Expert)
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20 March 2010 Or it may be framed as followed;

1. You may collect the certifucate in next visit.
2. Please bring the common seal while coming.

Regards
K.L.Paliwal

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Guest

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20 March 2010 Thank you so much Sirs.