Dekho Dilli Ka Bhavi Ca Chala Aa Raha Hai

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Namrata (Spirutial Being) (1841 Points)
Replied 20 April 2011

Good poem

best part of it i liked is

ABHI 12TH KI FAREWELL PARTY KI KHUMARI GAYI BHI NAHI THI,

BOARD EXAMS KI THAKAWAT MITI BHI BHI NAHI THI,

YAROON KI DOSTI KA NASHA UTRA BHI NAHIN THA,

TEACHERS SE BICHADNE KA GHAM MITA BHI NAHI THA,

AB EK NAYI DUNIYA KI AUR KADAM BADA RAHA HAI,

DEKHO DILLI KA BHAVI CA CHALA AA RAHA HAI

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tannu (article) (49 Points)
Replied 20 April 2011

awesome poem pulkit.. keep it up. !!!!!!!!

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Santhosh Poojary (SIEMPRE AHÍ PARA TI) (15607 Points)
Replied 20 April 2011

Hay Bro itz Just Awesome Poem n  Refreshing One.

Keep Writing.


karan kumar bhatia (student) (233 Points)
Replied 20 April 2011

nice poem dear... it is a story of ca student...

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CMA. CS. Sanjay Gupta ("PROUD TO BE AN INDIAN")   (114225 Points)
Replied 20 April 2011

Pulkit Your poem is very realistic, this is a poem of Every student of a professional exam. Really felt very nice after reading it. I dont know whether you know it or not, i have a habit of spontaneously adding to the poem....So i am also adding something here.....


Ye Jo Tumne CA karne ki thani hai....

Samajh lo karni tumhe manmani Hai...

 

Raah na ye hogi itni aasan....

Par na hona tum bhi kabhi pareshaan....

Chahe kitni bhi muskil aaye....

Tum hamesha chalna apna seena taan....

Samajh lo Institute tumhe CA banne se rokne k liye puri takat laga raha hai.....

Par tumhe bhi ladna hai, apne mehnat se jeetna hai taki sab kah sake....

Dekho wo delhi ka 1 Honhar CA Chala aa raha hai....

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CA Ravi Sisodia (CA,CS,CMA) (32226 Points)
Replied 20 April 2011

Ravi ka bhai kavi(pulkit).

good one dear.......

pulkit to hai albela, hazaro mein akela. Sada tumne pulkit me ca student dekha, hoonar(kavi) to na dekha.

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(Guest)

VERY NICE YAAR.. IT WAS FANTASTIC... 

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Swati (B. Com (h) CA Final) (403 Points)
Replied 21 April 2011

wonderful lines straight from the heart ...

a great poet in u  pulkit. 

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CS LLB Pulkit Gupta (https://www.facebook.com/pages/Life-and-Promises/553962034682487)   (16631 Points)
Replied 21 April 2011

Thx a lot everyone for encouraging me and accepting my poem. You people have added utility to my post.

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(Guest)

u always stand by us when we need u , anyone can write a article on  u  and this poem

but  time is the factor  ...that matter right now i will after 16 plz allow me to do that

and  yes i can  tell u onething u r  always  in  our  heart  i rem the day  , 

i m very upset and  u just make me fell good by telling  words which i can still tell u word by word

relly  u r  worth to rem all the life and thanks for keeping me in u r friends list

where ever we go we find  each other right !

"i need u again "




(Guest)
i can simply tell about u "U R DIAMOND WHICH I ALWAYS LIKE TO KEEP WITH ME "

Bharath (C.A,C.S) (3983 Points)
Replied 21 April 2011

NICE POEM BRO,.....

GOOD WORK,....

AFTER WRITING TEXTS, NOW U GOT UR NEXT TAKE OFF IN POEMS TOO,....

I THINK UR A CONTEMPORARY COMPETITOR TO THE GREAT SHAKESPEARE,.....

"LITTLE SHAKESPEARE",....:)

TRY FOR AN ENGLISH POEM,..COZ SOME MEMBERS CANNOT GET ON WELL WITH HINDI,....OK

KEEP ROCKING,...


CA Ankur Mittal (Assistant Manager @ Reliance Communication)   (759 Points)
Replied 21 April 2011

Nice Job Pulkit...you are Caclubindia X Factor..


Rahul Sharma (Student + A.M.- Finance)   (2530 Points)
Replied 21 April 2011

Zindagi mai ham kabhi na khaenge See You

Rahenge aapke sath hardam me & you

Kar ke aisa kaam jab jayenge, toh sab yahi kahenge

laout aao mujhe aapki jarurat hai......es jarurat ko aur badhate rahiye

Tham ke hath doston ka chalte rahiye,

Ek naye kal main jab rakhenge kadam toh office main honge ham

Sochkar Tax ki figure ko kaise adjust karna hai,

Es main toh Pulkit ki maharath hai, mujhe us se contact karna hai

Pulkit ka no. mujhe na mil payega par yaaro facebook se kahan bach payega

Twitter par karenge us se baat, Woh kahega kaisa hai tu

Tax ki problem ko us ke samne rakhkar kahunga, bata uska solution agar CA hai tu

Woh meri problem ko chutki main suljha jayega,

tab man main ye khyal aayega,

YAhi hai hai Delhi ka bhavi CA jo Intersting facts se karata hai apni pahchaan

Yaaro Pulkit hai uska Naam........

 

Really very nice poem.........

 

I will wait for your 2nd part

Thanks for Sharing



monika gupta (student) (786 Points)
Replied 21 April 2011

its a very nice poem and noone can say that you have written a poem for the first time.

and you should continue writing such things.



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