Dekho Dilli Ka Bhavi Ca Chala Aa Raha Hai

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Vikash Maheshwari (learner) (6358 Points)
Replied 24 April 2011

hey pulkit.............nice to c that u have started writing poems too..............well u have asked for a geniune opinion so to b very frank ......i found it ok types.........may b coz i have high expectations frm ur writing........it';s not as gud as is ur other articles and lacks some where ...........i feel use of too many english words doesnt leave as much impact as it shud create...............but it does tell a story...........cud have been better...............i knw u wont mind my opinions.....so i m not going to say sorry........

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CS LLB Pulkit Gupta (https://www.facebook.com/pages/Life-and-Promises/553962034682487) (16631 Points)
Replied 24 April 2011

Hey Vikash I was missing ur comments a lot. U r d second person after Deepak Gupta who has given me the comment what I expect from my readers (read it as my friends). This was my first work and I noe that there is a gr8 room for improvement and for dat I really wanna noe where did I lacked.

I am thankful to u you that you pointed out my weakness and I accept it with due respect.

I request others too that even if they found it bad or something missing and are not comfortable while commenting here den dey can also mail at my e-mail address.

Thx a lot

Pulkit

pulkit.caclubindia @ gmail.com

AARTI (JOB ) (23 Points)
Replied 25 April 2011

Very nice....

Vikash Maheshwari (learner) (6358 Points)
Replied 26 April 2011

hey...........thnx for taking my comments in d rite spirit.............but i dint mean it's bad........but i felt it's not that good.............nyways.....hope to c improved version of ur poestry in the tyms to come.............must b busy with studies now..........so all the very best..........do well in exms........