CA Raunak Maheshwari (in journey called LIFE) (394 Points)
17 January 2011कैसे मंज़र
कैसे मंज़र सामने आने लगे हैं
गाते-गाते लोग चिल्लाने लगे हैं
अब तो इस तालाब का पानी बदल दो
ये कँवल के फूल कुम्हलाने लगे हैं
वो सलीबों के क़रीब आए तो हमको
क़ायदे-क़ानून समझाने लगे हैं
एक क़ब्रिस्तान में घर मिल रहा है
जिसमें तहख़ानों में तहख़ाने लगे हैं
मछलियों में खलबली है अब सफ़ीने
उस तरफ़ जाने से क़तराने लगे हैं
मौलवी से डाँट खा कर अहले-मक़तब
फिर उसी आयत को दोहराने लगे हैं
अब नई तहज़ीब के पेशे-नज़र हम
आदमी को भूल कर खाने लगे हैं
CA Raunak Maheshwari
(in journey called LIFE)
(394 Points)
Replied 17 January 2011
WORD MEANINGS..
SALEEB= CROSS.., TWO-WAY ROAD..
AHLE- MAKTAB= PUPILS IN A ELEMENTARY SCHOOL
SAFEENA= BOAT.
CA Sanat Pyne
(F.C.A. & M.COM)
(20102 Points)
Replied 17 January 2011
How Monzar
How are beginning to appear Monzar
Sing - sing the people shouted
Now change the pond water two
Kanwal These flowers are beginning Kumhlane
She walked close to Slieboan us
Kaayde - are beginning to understand law
Getting home in a churchyard
Hahkhane which are engaged in Hahkhanoan
Fish in the storm now Ssfene
Are beginning to go that way Kaztaranae
Cleric after having scolded the Ahle - Mkzhb
Then began repeating the same verse
Now a new culture of the profession - we look
Forget the man ate
- Dushynt Kumar
Vikash Maheshwari
(learner)
(6358 Points)
Replied 17 January 2011
nice poem..............thnx 4 sharing...................
Santhosh Poojary
(SIEMPRE AHÍ PARA TI)
(15607 Points)
Replied 17 January 2011
| Originally posted by : sneha chhajer | ||
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bahaut khub...kya baat kya baat kya baat.... |
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Nikhil Kothari
(CEO at Sequinox Business Advisories)
(4671 Points)
Replied 17 January 2011
CA Raunak Maheshwari
(in journey called LIFE)
(394 Points)
Replied 17 January 2011
sorry to disagree nikhil..
but ye translation shi nhi tha..
bahut kuch galat ja rahe he..
is baare me maine sanay se bhi kaha tha,,
poem ko achhe se padhoge to pata chalega ki ye kya chij he..
it wasn't the rite translation..
Nikhil Kothari
(CEO at Sequinox Business Advisories)
(4671 Points)
Replied 17 January 2011
| Originally posted by : Raunak..... | ||
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sorry to disagree nikhil.. but ye translation shi nhi tha.. bahut kuch galat ja rahe he.. is baare me maine sanay se bhi kaha tha,, poem ko achhe se padhoge to pata chalega ki ye kya chij he.. it wasn't the rite translation.. |
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I agree with you bro...
But atleast he tried his best na.....
Manmohan ACA, CS
(Chartered Accountant )
(14243 Points)
Replied 17 January 2011
nice poem..............thnx 4 sharing...................
CAclubindia
